tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post2925814872082637940..comments2023-08-24T12:30:11.744+01:00Comments on Domestic Oubliette: Loveless Funny BusDomestic Oubhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-1972417952051460722010-07-21T20:54:12.599+01:002010-07-21T20:54:12.599+01:00lovely bit of 'effin' alliteration in '...lovely bit of 'effin' alliteration in 'conflicted former flame'<br>Liked it D'oub ,told a big story in a little way.I read it as serious , not funny, but then I'm a miserable git.Totalfeckineejithttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-80030815760088720452010-07-20T10:39:33.357+01:002010-07-20T10:39:33.357+01:00"my conflicted former flame" is such a t..."my conflicted former flame" is such a thoughtful one...too good...:)<br>~CheersErratic Thoughtshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-83355730153849295642010-07-20T09:59:21.336+01:002010-07-20T09:59:21.336+01:00I do so love short poems with punch. Yours is grea...I do so love short poems with punch. Yours is great and also a perfect short stop in my bus tour this early morning!Lydiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-40194611270271812912010-07-20T01:58:05.999+01:002010-07-20T01:58:05.999+01:00Short and sweet (very) and funny (very!)Short and sweet (very) and funny (very!)Helenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-36732280223211176002010-07-19T21:40:59.714+01:002010-07-19T21:40:59.714+01:00Like it. Complicated feelings - but straight to th...Like it. Complicated feelings - but straight to the point.Dominic Rivronhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02618013365521035400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-84071649056838238582010-07-19T20:47:54.976+01:002010-07-19T20:47:54.976+01:00Short and sweet can't be bad! :)Short and sweet can't be bad! :)jinksyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-41657712534111325242010-07-19T19:32:21.674+01:002010-07-19T19:32:21.674+01:00Yay! Short, funny and great last line.I'm wit...Yay! Short, funny and great last line.<br>I'm with you on the animals.Titushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-92030026881598124172010-07-19T19:07:57.681+01:002010-07-19T19:07:57.681+01:00Hehe! Looks like you have a good meeting with the...Hehe! Looks like you have a good meeting with the muse then!Argenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-63214068549505777562010-07-19T17:21:54.387+01:002010-07-19T17:21:54.387+01:00Hey DA - when you run into him, remind him he'...Hey DA - when you run into him, remind him he's not allowed go to Hooters. I don't care if he goes there just for the articles...<br><br>Thanks Niamh :)Domestic Oubhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.com