tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post3428278896852632599..comments2023-08-24T12:30:11.744+01:00Comments on Domestic Oubliette: Monday PoemDomestic Oubhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-53147379564447886162009-10-13T10:53:55.837+01:002009-10-13T10:53:55.837+01:00That is a fantastic, atmosphere packed poem. I lo...That is a fantastic, atmosphere packed poem. I love it.Niamh Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-22541435044055122302009-10-13T04:12:01.079+01:002009-10-13T04:12:01.079+01:00I love your use of metaphor here linking children ...I love your use of metaphor here linking children to storms. Your imagery whirls that photograph into our lives.Jeanne Irishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11277286531162894465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-64891310869575256372009-10-13T02:56:54.765+01:002009-10-13T02:56:54.765+01:00Tornado! That's great thinking! Enjoyed readin...Tornado! That's great thinking! Enjoyed reading this, especially as there's a raging storm outside here, giving even more atmosphere to your wonderful poem.Pamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15697574080548678521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-37815986172486499752009-10-13T00:21:45.864+01:002009-10-13T00:21:45.864+01:00Lots of really memorable images. I think your skin...Lots of really memorable images. I think your skinhead made his way into my interpretation of the same pic.Poetikathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-16470924318859125362009-10-12T23:43:19.478+01:002009-10-12T23:43:19.478+01:00This is a great poem! I'm with TFE on the ...This is a great poem! I'm with TFE on the 'twister...' bit. Such a whirling carousel of images left me out of breath almost. Kudos!Argenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-60141126148873945142009-10-12T23:37:50.519+01:002009-10-12T23:37:50.519+01:00Oh, I loved this - first, because it's very go...Oh, I loved this - first, because it's very good writing and second because it rings so many bells for me! I'm the smiler.<br>Lovely, gets better with each reading.Titushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-42719694805188540502009-10-12T22:11:33.628+01:002009-10-12T22:11:33.628+01:00Nice one D'Oub, no one else thought of a torna...Nice one D'Oub, no one else thought of a tornado!Ilove that the 'twister kicks like a skinhead' while 'the eye of the storm sits quietly on our bed' but best of all is 'but you dance, waltz, foxtrot, jive with the storm' Such a great image and such wry humour for a disaster.This poem is no disaster though.I really like it.Deadly! Tanks ye!Totalfeckineejithttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.com