tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post3698340327818088363..comments2023-08-24T12:30:11.744+01:00Comments on Domestic Oubliette: Monday Poem!Domestic Oubhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-24930859526092844762010-02-23T20:37:48.489+00:002010-02-23T20:37:48.489+00:00I like it and I like the idea of motherhood causin...I like it and I like the idea of motherhood causing you to carry far too much. It scans well enough. I liked it.Matt Boltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17921596600713853126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-29100952421330619422010-02-23T16:56:11.734+00:002010-02-23T16:56:11.734+00:00really loved the "rumpled mercantile origami&...really loved the "rumpled mercantile origami"<br />thanks for sharing<br />crazy field mouseAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-48610486112975641202010-02-23T15:46:18.105+00:002010-02-23T15:46:18.105+00:00scan? rhyming? what are those for?
Great work! Up ...scan? rhyming? what are those for?<br />Great work! Up the slievery is a favorite.NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-35615660096992156842010-02-23T15:00:31.578+00:002010-02-23T15:00:31.578+00:00this was so cool!.. I like the fact it's quite...this was so cool!.. I like the fact it's quite gushing.. and uses lovely language... :-DBatteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-28547183669570561632010-02-22T23:43:47.906+00:002010-02-22T23:43:47.906+00:00Thanks everyone!
I wish the list was
1) Complet...Thanks everyone!<br /><br />I wish the list was <br /><br />1) Completely made up - sadly, it's completely true! I've got to have a clear out...<br /><br />and <br /><br />2)comprehensive - but there is more in there, they just didn't have any rhymns<br /><br />I don't know how I stay upright...Domestic Oubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-83651830953716149442010-02-22T22:40:48.874+00:002010-02-22T22:40:48.874+00:00And you are still walking around? I love all the d...And you are still walking around? I love all the detritus of everyday living. I can just picture you pulling these out one by one. Great touches, here.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-51589241069811616282010-02-22T21:46:22.647+00:002010-02-22T21:46:22.647+00:00I liked the up-the-slievery as well. Terrific bou...I liked the up-the-slievery as well. Terrific bouncy word-play here!Argenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-91252033280768369672010-02-22T21:06:01.808+00:002010-02-22T21:06:01.808+00:00I really liked it!
The line that got me was;
"...I really liked it!<br />The line that got me was;<br />"Argos pen pilfered - casual thievery, up the slievery."<br /><br />Though I'm with Rachel, commando crumbs is good.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-47184493816175243132010-02-22T20:48:50.753+00:002010-02-22T20:48:50.753+00:00Commando crumbs are pretty cool too. I hate to thi...Commando crumbs are pretty cool too. I hate to think how old some of the crumbs are in my bag...<br />And the swimcap! A master stroke...<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-7495725742259287332010-02-22T19:35:23.660+00:002010-02-22T19:35:23.660+00:00'clouds of cottony snottingly mush'
will s...'clouds of cottony snottingly mush'<br />will stay with me for a long time.I think they probably will with you too!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-44212418789394614332010-02-22T18:37:28.078+00:002010-02-22T18:37:28.078+00:00I love this Oub - and it's so true. I love th...I love this Oub - and it's so true. I love the way you always carry a crayonNiamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.com