tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post5629245965623270714..comments2023-08-24T12:30:11.744+01:00Comments on Domestic Oubliette: More TFE inspired poetry...Domestic Oubhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-14223314474967089302009-09-15T09:17:45.626+01:002009-09-15T09:17:45.626+01:00Bit late but I agree - great last two lines.
xBit late but I agree - great last two lines.<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-50055346235789629072009-09-08T16:55:48.003+01:002009-09-08T16:55:48.003+01:00Thanks Titus :) I am actually in love with the tea...Thanks Titus :) I am actually in love with the teal velvetness of the cafe in the poem... and its generally quite a happy place... :)Domestic Oubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-24370359498621648622009-09-08T01:10:44.086+01:002009-09-08T01:10:44.086+01:00Aw, I know I'm echoing but that is a spectacul...Aw, I know I'm echoing but that is a spectacularly good ending.<br />I like all the poem's techniques, actually. "Teal velvet seats" is recreating an actual memory in me!<br /><br />Enjoyed this.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-86544195739237345832009-09-07T22:44:50.817+01:002009-09-07T22:44:50.817+01:00Nice one OubNice one OubNiamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-1617162724233035672009-09-07T22:10:00.397+01:002009-09-07T22:10:00.397+01:00Thanks TFE and EW :)
Please, TFE, more Monday cha...Thanks TFE and EW :)<br /><br />Please, TFE, more Monday challanges! After schools runs, swimming lessons and GAA practice on a Monday, it is bliss to put ten pence in my meter and do some writing.Domestic Oubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-80736457591757443002009-09-07T22:02:47.637+01:002009-09-07T22:02:47.637+01:00I'm with TFE. Great ending.I'm with TFE. Great ending.Emerging Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6643066160382165031.post-63314775067294755512009-09-07T21:53:50.560+01:002009-09-07T21:53:50.560+01:00I was hoping it was Bewleys but the teal seats tel...I was hoping it was Bewleys but the teal seats tell it wasn't <br /><br />'Loneliness and Darjeeling<br />today's specials.' What a great ending, I loved that and also 'Rain flogging cataratic windows.' Great alliteration halfway and overall the essence of the lonely cafe experience where 'space contracts, we've all felt that, right? Lovely D'Oub , thanks for joining in again. More to follow ,if you can stand it!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.com