I am on the bus. Everyone else has hopped off at their stop I am so late. It's only me and the drunk who has nodded off at the back.
Here was our prompt.
I went with the amber prompt.
Amber
I am amber, oozing
slowly sloth like
trapping you
my burnished love
to be entombed eternally
in your entirety
in my tenacious heart.
Here was our prompt.
I went with the amber prompt.
Amber
I am amber, oozing
slowly sloth like
trapping you
my burnished love
to be entombed eternally
in your entirety
in my tenacious heart.
4 comments:
Who's the drunk? He/she better hurry up! Great to have you on board!
fab and creepy... love it - edgar allen poe ish
entombed/eternally/entirity/tenacious heart?
Jib ,Jib, Jab, Kabooomba!
Ooh, that's rather beautiful. It's the repetition of the 'in' that's the masterstroke for me.
I wasn't drunk! Just napping.
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