Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Beep Beep

I am on the bus. Everyone else has hopped off at their stop I am so late. It's only me and the drunk who has nodded off at the back.

Here was our prompt.

I went with the amber prompt.

I am amber, oozing
slowly sloth like
trapping you
my burnished love
to be entombed eternally
in your entirety
in my tenacious heart.


Louise said...

Who's the drunk? He/she better hurry up! Great to have you on board!

Niamh B said...

fab and creepy... love it - edgar allen poe ish

Totalfeckineejit said...

entombed/eternally/entirity/tenacious heart?

Jib ,Jib, Jab, Kabooomba!

Titus said...

Ooh, that's rather beautiful. It's the repetition of the 'in' that's the masterstroke for me.

I wasn't drunk! Just napping.