
Various Cushions posted like this a few weeks ago, so I thought I'd copy her. As part of our writers group, we do a writing exercise before we start the serious work of telling each other how brilliant we all are.
This week Various suggested we free wrote a piece on a scene that takes place over five seconds.
We had five minutes to write. This is what I came up with:
"He lifts the fork to his mouth. A piece of onion, lemming like, dives from the mini mountain of food and dies - splat - on his tie. His eyes never leave Jeremy Clarkson and that little Hammond bloke on the tv screen. I can see the olive oil slick from the suicidal vegetable spread out, across its paisley graveyard. Clarkson barks. I sigh. I'm so leaving him."
Its short, but I think I like it :)

So, how should this make me feel? Am I achieving what I want out of life? Are three happy kids and one Jonathan Swift Competition win enough? Of course the happy kids bit is, but that's them, not me. It's Saturday night and soon the telly will auto tune itself back to the X Factor results.
Is that enough?
4 comments:
copy cat blogger!! Is one egg enough? or un aoef? (I Can't remember how to spell egg in french, and couldn't be bothered to figure it out)
Various - from cork
I think its un oeuf.
Or maybe not.
I always have two egss, so obviously, for me, it plainly isn't enough (un oeuf).
Cork?
sister, did you have a relationship with george galloway in the murky past?
OMG! Georgie Pie said it would be our little secret! Who told??
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